Hi all I am so sorry this is delayed. If you'd like any help with the manual I'll be available all today and tomorrow via email or we can schedule something!!
Overall, great job. here are my comments:
Abstract: this can be present tense, since the team still exists and is actively working on these goals (the first sentence)- you can even include a bit more info about the projects you're each working on right now and the goals
Fab Details: reference the photos in the text, and explain them a bit more thoroughly through labels
The image with the computer screens especially is a bit busy, could definitely benefit from some labeling
Sidney made this comment, but the tenses are a bit confusing. Maybe distinguish better what you have done already and what you plan to do, esp for the section on the calibration curve!
Hi all I am so sorry this is delayed. If you'd like any help with the manual I'll be available all today and tomorrow via email or we can schedule something!!
Overall, great job. here are my comments: