Second Changes: Close-Knit Flower Sack

[vhellstein]

• [x] @1000camels Darrin decided the font was too big. See Poem scale and design example: and https://emergencemagazine.org/poem/to-the-fig-tree-on-9th-and-christian/

• [x] @mpopke Subtitle/or direction with audio: “Listen to Poem, Narrated by Cedar Sigo”

• [x] @1000camels the line spacing is pretty tight when a line wraps. Please add a bit more space.

• [x] @1000camels My apologies about the "block quote" deletion--we do need to keep the spacing. See the indentation in the word doc.

Close_Knit_Flower_Sack_FINAL.docx

• [x] @1000camels There is a possibility that we might try to source an image for the background of this page, so the poem would be on top of it. Stay tuned for that...

[1000camels]

I have added a nowrap setting, which helps if someone's font is enlarged. On mobile, I shrunk it down, so it does not wrap, but it is too small. Not sure what to do.

[1000camels]

Just get me the image and I can add it. We can fade it if it conflicts with reading the poem

[1000camels]

I had a look at the Word doc and I am confused. Is the last half of the poem indented by half of the page?

[mpopke]

Yes, it is indented pretty significantly. It looks like they used actual spaces instead of tab stops, too. Might be easiest to just copy and paste directly into a div, and use white-space: pre;

[vhellstein]

I have added a nowrap setting, which helps if someone's font is enlarged. On mobile, I shrunk it down, so it does not wrap, but it is too small. Not sure what to do.

@1000camels I'll let Darrin know that it's really either that the text wraps or it's small/you have to scroll to the right on mobile.

[1000camels]

I have added the pre as @mpopke suggested