Hi @jungihong10 . You’ve defined a clear task of analyzing volleyball passing data to investigate how passing influences point outcomes. You have concise Visualization Goal, a correlation graph is good for exploring relationships between passes and points .
but i hava some suggestions.
On the Data Set side, you can give a little more specific information, such as what aspects of the data were used for this data set. Because in my opinion your Data set description is a bit too general. Also it would be nice for your Visualization Goals to give a rough graph of the results. Because it takes a little bit of imagination just from the text.
Of course, the program itself is good enough
Hi @jungihong10 . You’ve defined a clear task of analyzing volleyball passing data to investigate how passing influences point outcomes. You have concise Visualization Goal, a correlation graph is good for exploring relationships between passes and points . but i hava some suggestions. On the Data Set side, you can give a little more specific information, such as what aspects of the data were used for this data set. Because in my opinion your Data set description is a bit too general. Also it would be nice for your Visualization Goals to give a rough graph of the results. Because it takes a little bit of imagination just from the text. Of course, the program itself is good enough