shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'I only rested at home today' -> 'I just rested at home today'
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'I bought stock called wkhs today.' -> 'I bought a stock called WKHS today.'
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'Wkhs is company that uses drones to deliver.' -> 'WKHS is a company that uses drones to deliver.'
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'I hope to the stocks up.' -> 'I hope that the stock price goes up.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I just rested at home today. I woke up late. I worked out in the morning as soon as I woke up. After I finished working out, I took a shower. I bought a stock called wkhs today. Wkhs is a company that uses drones to deliver. I hope that the stock price goes up. I did my homework to play computer games. After I finished playing computer games, I studied math.