[Rita] - 2021년 5월 25일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work at 9AM. My team and I drove to 용인. It was raining. There was a traffic jam. On the way to field, we had burger for lunch We checked the field. The workers were so busy. They usually go to field at 6:30AM and they get off work at 5PM. The field is apartment. ('There are many apartments around the construction site.) So they can't work on the construction at night and over the weekend. Anyway, we went to another field in 수서. We had a meeting and I went to see the site to design. After seeing the site, I went to Starbucks and I drank coffee. I got tired. Because I went to to many site today.
And I went back to my office And I got off work at 12AM. I came back home.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I and my team to drive to 용인.' -> 'My team and I drove to 용인.'

2. 'The weather was rained day.' -> 'It was raining.'

3. 'The rode was a lot of traffic.' -> 'There was a traffic jam.'

4. 'cheaked' -> 'checked.'

5. 'The workers was so busy.' -> 'The workers were so busy.'

6. 'The field is apartment.' -> 'There are many apartments around the construction site.'

7. 'So we can't do construction night and weekend.' -> 'So they can't work on the construction at night and over the weekend.'

8. 'Anyway, We went to anather field in 수서.' -> 'Anyway, we went to another field in 수서.' (대문자)

9. 'I went to a cafe and I drank coffee Starbucks.' -> 'I went to Starbucks and I drank coffee.'

10. 'Because I went to to many site today.' -> 'Because I went to many sites today.'

11. 'And I went to back my office.' -> 'And I went back to my office'