Kinto / kinto-website

Website for the kinto ecosystem
http://www.kinto-storage.org/
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Revamped website. #9

Closed n1k0 closed 7 years ago

n1k0 commented 7 years ago

Call me a nerd but I'm especially glad with this:

r=? @leplatrem @glasserc @almet @Natim @magopian

Fixme

n1k0 commented 7 years ago

As expected the diff is hard to review, as basically everything has changed. Here's a link to the HTML section, let's focus on texts and wording for now https://github.com/Kinto/kinto-website/pull/9/files#diff-eacf331f0ffc35d4b482f1d15a887d3bR1

n1k0 commented 7 years ago

Feedback email from @glasserc:

This is my review of the design Niko has been working on: http://www.kinto-storage.org/tmp-v2-alt/

"The backend for your next application is already there". This should at least be "already here", but something still strikes me as odd about this and I can't put my finger on what. Maybe it's just me though.

"Why using kinto" -> "Why use kinto"

I might change "Redecentralize" into "Re-decentralize", to draw attention to the fact that it's a new word and not "recentralize".

"It’s hard for frontend developers to respect users privacy when building applications that work offline, store data remotely, and synchronise accross devices." Maybe move "respect users privacy" underneath "building applications" -- "It's hard for frontend developers to build applications that respect user privacy, work offline, store data remotely, and synchronise across devices". (Also, "user privacy" or "users' privacy". Also, "across" has one c.)

Otherwise everything looks good for me, very polished and professional.

n1k0 commented 7 years ago

Okay i'm gonna land this as is for now, we can keep iterating next.