Summary
heavenky
choose a more legible body text - times new roman - keep it functional
Feels like God of War would be better choice
Pillars of Design
Alooming
Better image for looming
Mood Painting 1 - Madi
Renee - image is starting to feel over-saturated (keep your pillar of Ancient in mind)
Animated Asset - Sarah
Ryland - arrow needs to be bigger
Michael - brass on bow design would make it heavy.
Renee - her costume does not support athletic / fighting mode. more practicality to her design.
Animated Central Asset - Enemy
Ryland "for some reason I like this"
Architecture
Marty likes these
Prop Sheet
Ryland - was is that a torture bench?
Ryland - concerned about how you are building this world.
Summary heavenky choose a more legible body text - times new roman - keep it functional Feels like God of War would be better choice
Pillars of Design Alooming Better image for looming
Mood Painting 1 - Madi Renee - image is starting to feel over-saturated (keep your pillar of Ancient in mind)
Animated Asset - Sarah Ryland - arrow needs to be bigger Michael - brass on bow design would make it heavy. Renee - her costume does not support athletic / fighting mode. more practicality to her design.
Animated Central Asset - Enemy Ryland "for some reason I like this"
Architecture Marty likes these
Prop Sheet Ryland - was is that a torture bench?
Ryland - concerned about how you are building this world.
REFERENCES
Martin MurphyToday at 5:24 PM @Madhurima alooming reference https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/690591619098869760/699680858864353330/Palace-Web-1.png
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/690647781005590569/699734073446367363/0b715e595b49898fa6e080cb590d18e2.png?width=548&height=866
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/690647781005590569/699735154347999312/a3bb4edbbe62b953bac78fc09dcc51f5.png