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Zaid-Ajaj / the-elmish-book

A practical guide to building modern and reliable web applications in F# from first principles
https://zaid-ajaj.github.io/the-elmish-book
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Proposition for README.md #23

Closed MangelMaxime closed 5 years ago

MangelMaxime commented 5 years ago

Here are some typos fixes and propositions for improving the "grammar".

In this sentence:

We will spend a great portion of the book talking about, understanding and building applications that follow this architecture starting from the very scratch until it becomes second nature to the reader; hence the name of this book.

I think I would do one of these two solutions;

- We will spend a great portion of the book talking about,
+ We will spend a great portion of the book talking about

- We will spend a great portion of the book talking about,
+ We will spend a great portion of the book talking about it,
Zaid-Ajaj commented 5 years ago

Thanks for the fixes Maxime :heart:

- We will spend a great portion of the book talking about,
+ We will spend a great portion of the book talking about

If I understand it correctly, without the comma it would mean "talking about the understanding" but with a comma it means "talking abount and understanding [it]" and I meant the latter of course

MangelMaxime commented 5 years ago

Ok, after your explanation I agree with it. Let's keep it that way :)