Open increpare opened 5 years ago
I've improved the first one:
I'll need to think about the best way to fix the second.
(while you're micromanaging, it seems that tawa is often a problem-character
linja-tawa toki-tawa ijo-tawa open-tawa me-tawa
ijo-tawa looks grand, bit in all the others : would it look better if it was pushed up a bit?
moli doesn't seem to fit so nicely within telo - other embeddings fit snugly inside/over without touching, but this one both touches and overlaps the lines of its parent character. (I kind of feel like the eyes are a detail small enough it's might be better to not to embed it - I was trying to write out a passage by hand at my normal writing size and for nested telo+moli i ended up with an indistinct blob between waves :P )
also kon+tawa self-intersects: