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dhakajack / web-cerveaux

Faute de cerveaux - web version - Inform 7 + Vorple 3
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random grammar/typo policing #17

Closed andrewschultz closed 6 years ago

andrewschultz commented 6 years ago

"Okay… But that would mean… this could be it. An end the pandemic!"

An end to the pandemic

"The first cases were reported in Cambodia and twenty-four hours later thousands" The first cases were reported in Cambodia, and twenty-four hours later, thousands

andrewschultz commented 6 years ago

"I've got a real hankering for something, I just can't quite put my paw on it." may be a runon, or it may be stylistic.

"No, it wasn't like that. I played with the kids, they fed me, they pet me all day, and I even had my own bed."

pet -> petted

dhakajack commented 6 years ago

Typos are my favorite!

I stuck an em-dash after "hankering for something".

I think I actually do say "pet" as a past participle, but I also say "draw" for what you put the spoons and knives in. Corrected.