Mostly pretty good, but trying to address a combination of correctness and "voice" things. Most of the "voice" changes are about trying to be as specific as possible, to help the reader understand how this all works, without being too verbose.
I've got a lot more to cover, but wanted to get this up for now.
Mostly pretty good, but trying to address a combination of correctness and "voice" things. Most of the "voice" changes are about trying to be as specific as possible, to help the reader understand how this all works, without being too verbose.
I've got a lot more to cover, but wanted to get this up for now.