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Working Copy of the NSEC5 Specification
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repeated "denial of existence" phrase in abstract could flow more smoothly. #5

Closed vttale closed 7 years ago

vttale commented 7 years ago

Proposed, change:

"The Domain Name System Security (DNSSEC) Extensions introduced the NSEC resource record (RR) for authenticated denial of existence and the NSEC3 RR for hashed authenticated denial of existence. This document introduces NSEC5 as an alternative mechanism for DNSSEC authenticated denial of existence. "

to:

"The Domain Name System Security (DNSSEC) Extensions introduced the NSEC resource record (RR) for authenticated denial of existence and the NSEC3 RR for hashed authenticated denial of existence. This document introduces NSEC5 as an alternative mechanism for DNSSEC denials. "

Having "denial of existence" repeated three times in two sentences feels prosaically cumbersome to me.