The first sentence of this paragraph is of questionable grammar
and, in any case, extremely hard to parse.
When domain names are used in SMTP, and unless further restricted in
this document, names that can be resolved to MX RRs or address (i.e.,
A or AAAA) RRs (as discussed in Section 5) are permitted, as are
CNAME RRs whose targets can be resolved, in turn, to MX or address
RRs.
Assuming I have parsed it correctly, how about:
Unless further restricted in this
document, domain names used in SMTP are names that can be resolved
to MX or address (A or AAAA) RRs (see also Section 5), or to CNAME
RRs that can be resolved to an MX or address RR.
Donald Eastlake d3e3e3@gmail.com wrote:
The first sentence of this paragraph is of questionable grammar and, in any case, extremely hard to parse.
When domain names are used in SMTP, and unless further restricted in this document, names that can be resolved to MX RRs or address (i.e., A or AAAA) RRs (as discussed in Section 5) are permitted, as are CNAME RRs whose targets can be resolved, in turn, to MX or address RRs.
Assuming I have parsed it correctly, how about:
Unless further restricted in this document, domain names used in SMTP are names that can be resolved to MX or address (A or AAAA) RRs (see also Section 5), or to CNAME RRs that can be resolved to an MX or address RR.