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Roni Even - Comment 1 #16

Closed iffy50 closed 5 years ago

iffy50 commented 5 years ago

In section 2 " The adopts the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)" there is a word missing?

iffy50 commented 5 years ago

Email 10/1/19

Actually, looking at that paragraph as a whole, the second sentence is awkward as well, so I’ll reword:

old: The adopts the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342]. The meaning of the symbols in tree diagrams is defined in [RFC8340].

new: The YANG modules in this document adopt the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342]. The meanings of the symbols used in tree diagrams are defined in [RFC8340].

There’s going to be at least one more update to address the other review comments before it gets to the editor, so I’ll update then.

iffy50 commented 5 years ago

Reply from Roni 10/1/19

HI Ian, This looks good, I assumed that it was the meaning of the text Roni

iffy50 commented 5 years ago

Updated draft-ietf-softwire-yang-15-inprogress.xml with the agreed text.