Closed malachig closed 10 years ago
Hi @malachig - thanks for the close read!
I was in the midst of doing some other minor corrections and rewordings, so I hope you don't mind if I just copy your corrections into the current state of my draft (rather than dealing with merge conflicts in prose, which is never fun).
Changes are incorporated in 3b435698f6a1ed13dba000deb9f55c4d08cc1937 - Thanks!
This sounds great. Pull request contains some minor suggestions and typo fixes.