Closed Taco-Cat1 closed 4 days ago
The last phone calls needs to have a space to make it phone calls instead of phonecalls
The "I" in the sentence needs to be capitalized
Your choice on whether this is worth fixing but the spaces after the full stops seem very big
Myself is spelled incorrectly as myshelf
The "ow" at the start of the sentence might be intentional but might read smoother if changed to "oh"
To make this read more smoothly it should be "
The "I" in the sentence needs to be capitalized
Also "Thats" in the first dialogue option should be "That's"
Fixed