wording tweaks in the intro paragraph

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A community guide to the Rust ecosystem

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wording tweaks in the intro paragraph #40

Closed oconnor663 closed 1 year ago

oconnor663 commented 1 year ago

I've added some examples to the opening paragraph and reworded things a little bit. This is personal style stuff, so please feel free to close this without comment if you prefer the original.

nicoburns commented 1 year ago

Thanks, this is much better. I always felt like what I'd written was awkwardly phrased, but I hadn't gotten around to fixing it yet.