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Formatting and grammar of Target user profile can be improved #2964

Open nus-pe-bot opened 1 week ago

nus-pe-bot commented 1 week ago

Steps to reproduce

  1. Go to the user guide.
  2. Scroll to the Requirements section.
  3. Refer to the Target user profile under Product scope.

Expected

The target user should be in a main point, and the needs of the user should be grammatically correct.

Actual

The target user and the corresponding needs are all in bullet points, with some grammatical errors. For example, since "teachers" is plural, the second bullet point should be "want.." instead of "wants...".

How to improve the product

The target user profile can be highlighted as a main point. Ensure the needs of the target user (in bullet points) are grammatically correct. For example,

Target user profile: Piano teachers 

- with a significant number of piano students
- who want to record information about students
- who are looking to organize their schedule and teaching activities
- who prefer desktop apps over other types
- who can type fast
- who prefer typing to mouse interactions
- who are reasonably comfortable using CLI apps

Screenshot

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[original: nus-cs2103-AY2425S1/pe-interim#1351] [original labels: type.DocumentationBug severity.VeryLow]

IzN432 commented 1 week ago

Team's Response

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This does not hinder the reader.

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