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Mark 2:3 - Better Wording - Word order #299

Open DJHugger opened 12 years ago

DJHugger commented 12 years ago

The OEB currently reads:

"Some people came, bringing to him a paralyzed man, who was being carried by four of them."

The current reading is unnecessarily awkward recommend rearranging in the following way:

"Some people came to him bringing to a paralyzed man, who was being carried by four of them."