Right now, the way Lesser domination reads doesn't make sense with the rest of Domination.
It is a Fail x 3 = 1 hour or Resist ends (pretty normal)
But Lesser domination says The target obeys a one word command until the end of their next turn. It doesn't give any information on giving more commands. In Greater it mentions that you have to use a Major action to give a new command.
In Greater it says
The dominated creature will continue to obey the last mental command they were given until you give a new command.
but that seems to be only include with Greater, and not Lesser b/c of the paragraph setup. I would think it works the same way for Lesser, but the reason Lesser was maybe worded that way was b/c of the creature being able to resist at the end of their turn?
Perhaps changing the wording just above both Lesser and Greater to be instead of:
The dominated bane manifests at two levels: lesser and greater.
to be:
The dominated bane manifests at two levels: lesser and greater. In both cases the dominated creature will continue to obey the last mental command they were given until you give a new command or they resist the bane.
Though perhaps some additional wording needed that it takes a Major action to give a new command? Or just modifying the last 2 sentences of the Greater Domination section to be a different paragraph.
Not sure I can give a good suggestion right now, been traveling since 3 am, and it is 10:30 pm right now, but wanted to flag this for @istabosz and @brianfeister , just hope my brain was able to point it out enough right now.
Right now, the way Lesser domination reads doesn't make sense with the rest of Domination.
It is a Fail x 3 = 1 hour or Resist ends (pretty normal)
But Lesser domination says The target obeys a one word command until the end of their next turn. It doesn't give any information on giving more commands. In Greater it mentions that you have to use a Major action to give a new command.
In Greater it says
but that seems to be only include with Greater, and not Lesser b/c of the paragraph setup. I would think it works the same way for Lesser, but the reason Lesser was maybe worded that way was b/c of the creature being able to resist at the end of their turn?
Perhaps changing the wording just above both Lesser and Greater to be instead of:
to be:
Though perhaps some additional wording needed that it takes a Major action to give a new command? Or just modifying the last 2 sentences of the Greater Domination section to be a different paragraph.
Not sure I can give a good suggestion right now, been traveling since 3 am, and it is 10:30 pm right now, but wanted to flag this for @istabosz and @brianfeister , just hope my brain was able to point it out enough right now.