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What does "it" mean? #18

Closed murata2makoto closed 5 years ago

murata2makoto commented 6 years ago

In 5.3 of LCP

Since it is product of the calculation, the signature object of the License Document MUST be removed.

What does this "it" mean?. This is not the only confusing use of "it" in this spec.

murata2makoto commented 6 years ago

All occurrences of "it" in 5.5.1 are confusing.

llemeurfr commented 5 years ago

Well, "it" logically refers to the signature object in this sentence.

Re. 5.5.1, I agree that the first "It" has no meaning. After replacement by "The Reading System" as in 5.5.2, I believe the next bullets make sense ("It" being the Reading system).

murata2makoto commented 5 years ago

Then, how about this?

Since the signature object of the License Document is product of the calculation, it must be removed.

llemeurfr commented 5 years ago

good for me.