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Joe
逐字稿:I agree with have musical instrument is e~ is improtant. E~~ because learn to play a musical instrument is very improtant. It can help us to gorw.
修改稿:I strongly agree that learning a musical instrument is of great importance. It not only helps us cultivate patience in our daily lives but also enhances our mental faculties. Mastering an instrument provides us with an additional avenue and numerous advantages for university admission. In the midst of the mundane, being able to play an instrument adds a fascinating dimension to our lives. Education is a lifelong journey, and the skills acquired through playing an instrument will accompany us forever.
Day5 ESL S/L -- Rosefinch | Mr.Mou @ ShiShi AP Center
https://shishiapcs.github.io/ESL-summer-day5-Rosefinch/