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The Swift Programming Language book
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Remove redundant sentence #302

Closed SimplyDanny closed 4 months ago

SimplyDanny commented 6 months ago

Seems like the message of the previous sentence is pretty much the same.

SimplyDanny commented 5 months ago

If you'd like to try rewriting for clarity, please go ahead on this PR. Otherwise, you can let me know and I'll try rewriting.

I tried to reword the paragraph.

amartini51 commented 5 months ago

Thanks @SimplyDanny — I think we're going to come back to this. The rewrite has several issues, and I'm currently focusing on new content for topics like safe concurrency and noncopyable types. I set a reminder to look at this again in June, when hopefully more time will be available.

amartini51 commented 4 months ago

Closing this PR in favor of the rewrite on https://github.com/apple/swift-book/pull/315

Thanks for pointing out the hard to read wording!