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An app that streamlines the process of getting support under the Care Act through The Advocacy Project
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FOR RACHEL: NEED TO CHECK COPY ON VARIOUS PAGES #54

Open teenie-quaggard opened 5 years ago

teenie-quaggard commented 5 years ago

- [ ] Intermediary to application page

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Copy: We will now ask you a series of questions to gather evidence of your eligibility for support and an advocate under the Care Act.

The application will be broken up into three sections:

Eligibility Gathering evidence of your eligibility against the outcomes outlined in the Care Act

Wellness Checking the extent to which your wellbeing is negatively affected by the obstacles outlined in the eligibility section of the application

Advocacy Gathering evidence about your need for an advocate to help with the process of receiving support under the Care Act

Take your time answering the questions and don’t worry if there are sections which you do not see as relevant to you.

Answer to the best of your ability and expand as much as necessary in the text input boxes. Remember that your own needs may differ from the examples that we have provided - please elaborate as necessary.

SHORT BLURB BEFORE OUTCOMES

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Copy The questions above are examples of how you may meet this requirement.

Please expand and / or let us know other ways you need help managing and maintaining nutrition below.

About us page Just wanted to check that this is all you want to see on the page? This is what it said in the copy but wasn't sure if you wanted to keep everything that was there before as well.

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Copy

The Advocacy Project has developed this app to help people with the process of getting the help they need from the local authority.

For more information, check out our website.

rachel-butt commented 5 years ago

Copy edit:

We will now ask you a series of questions to gather evidence of your right to a Care Act assessment, eligibility for support and an advocate to help you through the Care Act process.

The application will be broken up into three sections:

Eligibility

Gathering evidence of your right to a Care Act assessment and eligibility for support against the outcomes outlined in the Care Act.

Wellbeing Checking the extent to which your wellbeing is negatively affected if you do not get the support you need to meet the outcomes outlined in the Care Act.

Advocacy Gathering evidence about your need for an advocate to help with the process of receiving support under the Care Act.

rachel-butt commented 5 years ago

The Advocacy Project has developed this app to help people with the process of getting the help they need from the local authority.

For more information, check out our website.

[I think this is fine for now, with a link to hackney website: https://www.advocacyproject.org.uk/news/the-advocacy-project-in-hackney/ ]

teenie-quaggard commented 5 years ago

Thanks Rachel!