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Various typo, grammar fixes, and linking #10

Closed GoogleCodeExporter closed 9 years ago

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago 
The attached patch fixes these small issues:

Typo/grammar fixes:
* existant → existent
* IE → i.e.,
* an Google → a Google
* effect → affect (when used as a verb)
* heirarchical → hierarchical
* attribiute → attribute
* whitepater → whitepaper
* an 'waveop' element → a 'waveop' element
* docuemnt → document
* ", however " → ". However, "
* within wave → within a wave
* Fixed various <foo< to <foo>

Other changes:
* Request Message → Request Element (to fit with Delta Element.. maybe the
* other way is preferred...)
* Linked "add participant operation" to the section on the addparticipant
element later in the document.
* Linked "Access control whitepaper" to the whitepaper.
* Changed "range of ops" to "range of operations"
* Changed the "urn:googlep:wave:requests" namespace in the example to
"urn:google:wave:requests". That is in line with the other examples. The
'p' is probably a typo
* Added periods at the end of several lines.
* Changed "MUST contain ONE" to "MUST contain exactly ONE" -- if that's the
intention, it seems more clear.
* Fixed copy-pasted wording of <removeparticipant> element.

Original issue reported on code.google.com by saltyho...@gmail.com on 5 Jun 2009 at 12:27

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GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago 
Thank you for all the fixes. They should all be incorporated into the June 8 
revision
yesterday and a follow up changeset today.

Original comment by so...@google.com on 9 Jun 2009 at 2:53