Higurashi are bugs and have a short life

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my notes : Chapter 1 : -Rena's face is smiling when she should be piqued. <<you're so cold, Keiichi>>. FIXED -Rena's face blushing << Her face flushed red>> before. FIXED -Rena's face surprised blush << forever>> before. FIXED -Rena's face defensive blush << never read any>> before. FIXED -<< Morning Rena>> Mion, comma missing. FIXED -Mion's face closed eyes, hand out << Rena's measurements>> before. replace. FIXED -Mion's face open eyes, hand out << really wanna know eh?>> before. replace. FIXED -<< But in the end nothing more than>> comma missing FIXED -<< but they're sho kyute?>> timing. FIXED -<< just looking, that should be fine>> timing. edit : no sound file??? WILL BE FIXED -Mion's face smiling, closed eyes, hand out <<we managed it!>> replace. FIXED -<< Rise. Attention>> Mion's face, open eyes, hand in. replace. FIXED -<< with these marks...>> timing too slow. FIXED -Mion's face, sly eyes, hand in. << not enough to weed em out>> before. FIXED -Rika's face, slight smile <<Itadakimasu!>> before. FIXED -<< everyone liked it so much, I made more>> Rena name missing. FIXED -<< yellow one is>> lower the timing. FIXED -<< but the green one>> lower the timing. FIXED -<< uwwwwaaaan>> lower the timing. FIXED -<< supersonic speeds>> no s at speed. FIXED

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Looks good to me.

Btw. in case you need some expressions that are not currently in the pack but are in PS3, we can add them.

[orian34]

Didn't seem to be any needed for now, thanks.