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Jamie Trailer feedback 2
#42
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rhuberga
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8 years ago
rhuberga
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8 years ago
Use first mountain closeup to reveal 2nd shot.
3rd shot, slow down or replace
388 tunnel, disorienting, keep familiar elements in the shot, or shuffle the reveal to the beginning
Keep the eye
in game POV near end where you can see exit, avoiding arms
4th corner needs more stuff, even if it's just clouds