[PD] Review your peers' LinkedIn profile

A-Bahadory commented 7 months ago

From Module-JS3 created by kfklein15: CodeYourFuture/Module-JS3#228

Coursework content

Review your Teamwork Project team members’ LinkedIn profiles and provide constructive feedback.

Consider the information added to their profile, their photos, their transferrable skills, if you can spot any grammar or spelling mistakes, what they’ve posted recently and how they are interacting on it.

When giving feedback, remember that this is an important moment to give your peer a present.

[x] Describe what you can see/evaluate on their LinkedIn page
[x] Explain why you think it is good with a clear example
[x] Explain the impact of it, either positive or negative
[x] Have a conversation about it

Estimated time in hours (PD has max 4 per week total)

1

What is the purpose of this assignment?

Code Your Future believes in collective intelligence, which focuses on openness and sharing. This assignment will allow you to support your peers and learn from each other.

How to submit

Share the screenshot of your feedback on this issue.
If you provided feedback in person, write it down and add it as a comment on this issue.

A-Bahadory commented 7 months ago

https://www.linkedin.com/in/karam-ali-93030987?

Great job on getting started with creating your LinkedIn account! To enhance your profile, consider providing a more detailed and descriptive overview of yourself, highlighting your role and expertise within the tech field. This will help make your profile more informative and engaging for others who visit it. Adding specific details about your skills, experiences, and accomplishments will make your profile stand out and provide a clearer picture of your professional background. Keep up the good work!

kroker42 commented 6 months ago

@A-Bahadory Thanks for taking the time to provide feedback to your team member. Your feedback is very generic, and looks like it has been copied from a feedback bot. Did you use AI to generate it?

Please try to personalise your feedback, and use concrete examples of what you think your team mate could improve.

For instance, are there sentences you think they could improve, e.g. make clearer, improve the language or grammar? I found at least one issue with grammar in the specific profile.

Since you know them and their work, are there any specific skills you think that they should highlight?

Please add some more specific feedback, then tag me here so I get a notification.

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