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Helga Ingimundardottir's PhD Thesis in Computational Engineering : Adaptive Learning Intelligent Composite rulEs
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Proofread chapters/introduction #1

Open tungufoss opened 8 years ago

tungufoss commented 8 years ago

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Some rephrasing is needed on these sentences:

tungufoss commented 8 years ago

One fix (of many) my adviser sent me:

scheduling, e.g., Asmuni et al. (2009) ------> scheduling, where e.g., Asmuni et al. (2009) or ---> scheduling, cf., Asmuni et al. (2009)

Overall @bnvk all my Latin abbreviations need reconsidering - in all subsequent chapters #2 #3 #4 #5 #6 #7 #8 #9 #10 #11 #12 #13

Also. I should not start sentences with ""By, As, Because ..."