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Simple Naming Architecture for Homenet
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introduction: clarification of simple way #2

Closed mglt closed 7 years ago

mglt commented 7 years ago

This document describes a simple way of providing name service and service discovery for homenets.

My understanding is that the document also provides an analysis and requirements for the architecture as well as the architecture itself. I am proposing the following text to be a little bit more explicit for "simple way".

This document describes a simple naming architecture that fulfills the expectations and constraints foreseen by the average home network. Such home network are typically a subset of the more generic home network described in [8] and is designated as the Simple Home Network or simply home network in this document. The document does not intent to provide a full and complete naming architecture that can be achieved with additional skills and settings.

Abhayakara commented 7 years ago

How about:

This document describes a simple architecture for providing name service and service discovery on homenets. It provides a subset of the functionality described in the Homenet Architecture [8], and is intended to serve both as a feature set for minimal homenet routers, and to provide a foundation for a complete homenet architecture that allows such minimal routers to provide full naming and service discovery when at least one fully-functional homenet router is present on the home network.

mglt commented 7 years ago

sounds good to me. Thanks for proposing the text.

Abhayakara commented 7 years ago

Document updated.