AguaClara / Fluoride-Auto

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RA feedback report 2 #74

Closed tm545 closed 5 years ago

tm545 commented 5 years ago

Hi all your report looks good and thanks for all the work you've been doing this semester, keep it up.

Your writing in the intro and the lit review is good. I would sparse in some more writing about how this literature can be used within your work.

For future reports I would convert the screenshot of the parts assembly within onshape to a drawing file so that you can get dimensions within your picture. Unrelated to your report here but we've been talking about why we are using 1.5 mm/s upflow velocity (to reduce sludge buildup which I think we don't have to worry about and go back to a 1 mm/s if it was up to me.

Your schematic looks classy I'm a big fan. A few slight fixes you I would include is that the flocculator was increased in length so that your retention time increased. Also a fluoride reactor sounds a little iffy, and I would just call it the sed tube.

I think your experiments in decreasing floc blanket height and its composition could definitely be included in your results section and conclusions. Your thoughts on why you went from red dye back to fluoride could also be included here to discuss why your work with red dye gave you confidence that you could go back to fluoride.

Also delete the the sample python code at the very end of the document folks.

All in all top notch work, keep it up.