Our goal is to fabricate a user-friendly gravity-powered fluoride removal system that will be used for research. We aim to make the system easily adjustable so that various parameters can be tested.
Final report comments - no need to revise or alter the report based on these.
Your literature report as well as previous work section are very well written and well done. Your work is easy to understand and your figures are very well.
You do well in discussing why your apparatus changes and why those changes were made (what they were made to address).
I'm not sure if it's because of I'm viewing it on github but your figure 13,15,19, 20, 25, 26, 27, and 28 doesn't show up for me make sure the links you have in your report end with the "raw=true" portion of the http domain.
For your drawing of the bottom geometry in figure 14 you want to make sure that the bottom geometry is to be able to be remade based on your drawing. While most things are shown in the drawing you're missing dimensions on the first slanted portion before the second one.
Overall your report is very well done and is easy to read and understand.
Final report comments - no need to revise or alter the report based on these.
Your literature report as well as previous work section are very well written and well done. Your work is easy to understand and your figures are very well.
You do well in discussing why your apparatus changes and why those changes were made (what they were made to address).
I'm not sure if it's because of I'm viewing it on github but your figure 13,15,19, 20, 25, 26, 27, and 28 doesn't show up for me make sure the links you have in your report end with the "raw=true" portion of the http domain.
For your drawing of the bottom geometry in figure 14 you want to make sure that the bottom geometry is to be able to be remade based on your drawing. While most things are shown in the drawing you're missing dimensions on the first slanted portion before the second one.
Overall your report is very well done and is easy to read and understand.