Hi guys! Overall great job on the report. I have made comments as the same way as before, and please address them and send it to me by the end of next week (8/16). However, there were a few comments that you forgot to address last time so I will just list them out too:
Overall, try to use passive voice as much as you can. (esp methods)
Write previous work in a general form instead of separating by semester. I think writing it by semester makes the flow more discontinuous. Summarize the main points of the semester by the importance of their findings and how they influenced this summer's work
for figure 8, you said step 1-10, but it's unclear which step 1 - 10 are you talking about. It will also be helpful if you can label this figure.
results: for max angle, state where you are measuring from, a figure might also be helpful here
results: briefly state what happens if you try to fit more passes of string for number of strings on a rod
future works: future perfect tense here
manual: set up materials as a table, with where to purchase, link to purchase, price, dimension and quantity
Hi guys! Overall great job on the report. I have made comments as the same way as before, and please address them and send it to me by the end of next week (8/16). However, there were a few comments that you forgot to address last time so I will just list them out too:
here is the link