Great job on the report! I like the use of CAD images to showcase the plant designs. Besides fixing a few typos and formatting issues, here are some suggestions for bettering your report. I would recommend making a separate copy of the report so that you can reference the line numbers on my comments before making any necessary edits.
[ ] Line 8: Use future tense and passive voice for the semester goals — “Over Spring 2019, the goal of UASB Design will be to…”
[ ] Line 11: Add more content to the introduction. The intro section should give insight into what a UASB is, why it matters, and a brief summary of what the team is working on.
[ ] Line 15: Give a stronger opening statement for the lit review section rather than a vague, generalized one
[ ] Line 19: Add embedded links to your sources in citations. This can be done in Markdown by using the following format: [add text here](add hyperlink here)
[ ] Line 23: Why are energy consumption and environmental footprints issues that WW treatment plants face? Expand on that a little more.
Avoid using oversimplified statements about other countries.
[ ] Line 28: Explain in more detail how a UASB reactor works for an audience who may not know this. Adding an image of the UASB schematic might help with this.
[ ] Line 37: Use ## formatting to create subheadings
[ ] Line 38: The second sentence seems grammatically inconsistent, so consider rephrasing it.
[ ] Line 49: It might help to add an image of the proposed influent system just above or below this paragraph.
[ ] Line 70: Images and their captions should be centered
[ ] Line 74: Add images to guide the reader wherever a component is being described
[ ] Line 79: Figure 2 seems to have been captioned twice.
[ ] Line 80: Good job on the images! They really help visualize the influent system. Just make sure to insert them with the paragraphs that describe their working.
[ ] Line 100: Describe in a sentence or two what head loss is.
[ ] Line 111: I’m not 100% sure I understand what is happening in figure 6. Is there a better way to show/ describe this image?
Great job on the report! I like the use of CAD images to showcase the plant designs. Besides fixing a few typos and formatting issues, here are some suggestions for bettering your report. I would recommend making a separate copy of the report so that you can reference the line numbers on my comments before making any necessary edits.
[ ] Line 8: Use future tense and passive voice for the semester goals — “Over Spring 2019, the goal of UASB Design will be to…”
[ ] Line 11: Add more content to the introduction. The intro section should give insight into what a UASB is, why it matters, and a brief summary of what the team is working on.
[ ] Line 15: Give a stronger opening statement for the lit review section rather than a vague, generalized one
[ ] Line 19: Add embedded links to your sources in citations. This can be done in Markdown by using the following format: [add text here](add hyperlink here)
[ ] Line 23: Why are energy consumption and environmental footprints issues that WW treatment plants face? Expand on that a little more. Avoid using oversimplified statements about other countries.
[ ] Line 28: Explain in more detail how a UASB reactor works for an audience who may not know this. Adding an image of the UASB schematic might help with this.
[ ] Line 37: Use ## formatting to create subheadings
[ ] Line 38: The second sentence seems grammatically inconsistent, so consider rephrasing it.
[ ] Line 49: It might help to add an image of the proposed influent system just above or below this paragraph.
[ ] Line 70: Images and their captions should be centered
[ ] Line 74: Add images to guide the reader wherever a component is being described
[ ] Line 79: Figure 2 seems to have been captioned twice.
[ ] Line 80: Good job on the images! They really help visualize the influent system. Just make sure to insert them with the paragraphs that describe their working.
[ ] Line 100: Describe in a sentence or two what head loss is.
[ ] Line 111: I’m not 100% sure I understand what is happening in figure 6. Is there a better way to show/ describe this image?
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