Overall, great job with the report! I like the detailed introduction and the use of images to explain what you will be working on this semester. Besides a few typos and grammar fixes, here are my critiques. I would recommend making a separate copy of the report so that you can reference the line numbers on my comments before making any necessary edits.
[x] Line 37: Embed links to sources in your citations
[x] Line 40: Add an image of a conventional UASB reactor for reference while explaining how it works
[x] Line 47: Define what chemical oxygen demand is. Also provide citation after the first sentence rather than at the end. Conversion of Rupees to USD might also be helpful.
[x] Line 49: Avoid oversimplified generalizations about countries and the use of phrases such as “undeveloped countries”. Consider using the term “developing countries” instead.
UASB-Research Report Critique
Overall, great job with the report! I like the detailed introduction and the use of images to explain what you will be working on this semester. Besides a few typos and grammar fixes, here are my critiques. I would recommend making a separate copy of the report so that you can reference the line numbers on my comments before making any necessary edits.
[x] Line 37: Embed links to sources in your citations
[x] Line 40: Add an image of a conventional UASB reactor for reference while explaining how it works
[x] Line 47: Define what chemical oxygen demand is. Also provide citation after the first sentence rather than at the end. Conversion of Rupees to USD might also be helpful.
[x] Line 49: Avoid oversimplified generalizations about countries and the use of phrases such as “undeveloped countries”. Consider using the term “developing countries” instead.
[x] Line 66: Explain what the IAWWTF is.
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