Great job on the report. Do proofread to fix a couple of grammar errors and typos that I came across, and make sure to address all the grader’s comments because they echoed my thoughts in several places and I didn’t repeat comments. However, I did have a couple of other comments which are listed by line below:
[ ] Line 64: Avoid using too many apostrophes in technical writing. Use passive voice as much as possible.
[ ] Line 97: Include a hyperlink to the Onshape model of the UASB
[ ] Line 95: I would recommend making an appendix with all the components you bought and what they were used for. If possible, embed links to their websites.
[ ] Line 111: Specify that each section has to fill up to the same level to ensure even distribution of water. Also this is something UASB-R is experimenting with at the moment so do mention that.
[ ] Line 115: One way to avoid switching between imperial and metric units is to include the other in parentheses each time.
[ ] Line 153: Explain that the bubble counter will only be used in the prototype. We’re still keeping the gas balloon for the ones we will make and deploy in Honduras
[ ] Line 155: The wording on the last sentence is a bit janky. Consider rephrasing.
[ ] Line 651: Use a space after ## otherwise the formatting for headings will not show up
Great job on the report. Do proofread to fix a couple of grammar errors and typos that I came across, and make sure to address all the grader’s comments because they echoed my thoughts in several places and I didn’t repeat comments. However, I did have a couple of other comments which are listed by line below: