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Bastet typos/suggestions part 2 #297

Closed CalmKhaos closed 9 years ago

CalmKhaos commented 9 years ago

“Thank you, _Your Ladyship_,” they reply in unison with a grin. _They_ walk towards the altar, kneeling besides it and motioning for you to hop on.

“Yes, _Your Ladyship_.” Adala moves to pick up one of the _jars while_ the twins stand beside you. “We’ll start on the top. _Please,_ close your eyes, _Your Ladyship_.”

No sooner have your eyes fallen _shut,_ warm liquid begins gently pouring over your face.

“Open your mouth, _Your Ladyship_,” whispers one of _twins_ into your ear.

Without _hesitation,_ you part your jaws, letting the oil flow directly onto your tongue. It’s thick and rich, almost like honey in its consistency, and just like _honey,_ it tastes wonderfully sweet.

At _once,_ your eyes spring open, revealing that you are locking lips with the luscious Adala.

“The changes have already started. How do you feel, _Your Ladyship_?”

You sound... girlier, than you remember. It’s such a soft and dainty _voice, but_ it’s melodious, too.

“I’m glad to hear _it_. We will be moving on to your chest now, _Lady_ Bastet.”

“Sorry, _Your Ladyship_. I couldn’t resist,” she says with a mischievous smile. You gasp once more as her naughty little twin does the same to your other nipple. “Forgive me, _Your Ladyship_,” she says with a mischievous smile of her own.

“Of course, _Your Ladyship_. We’re here to serve,” says Ming. “And serve we shall.” says Ling.

Blood rushes under your skin, making your nipples swell proud and firm, all the _sign_ that the catgirls need.

It is as if you _are…_ are being invigorated by the worship of your priestesses! (It looked like a stutter-like instance. Would this be ok?)

“I’m pleased to hear that, _Your Ladyship_,” says Adala, stopping her attentions on your midriff.

“May I, _Your Ladyship_?”

A luxuriant purr rumbles out of your belly as you feel soft, _dexterous_ fingers playing lazily around your manhood.

“Lose this part? What do you mean, _Your Ladyship_?”

“Forgive me, _Your Ladyship_,” she says, stifling her laughter.

Lady Bastet is the goddess of love, and as _such,_ she has many aspects.

Tell me, _Your Ladyship_, which aspect do believe to be your true aspect?

No, _Your Ladyship._

So they just pick one of your many aspects, _Your Ladyship_.

But as the goddess of _love,_ you must also have the means to show your faithful that you love them, and could you do that if you were not properly equipped to do so?

_Usually,_ it’s a lot of work making sure a worthy penis grows, but in your case, _Your Ladyship – you_ already have such a beautiful one...

“Simply anoint it, _Your Ladyship, unless_ you don’t mind me playing with it a bit. If I must confess, I’ve had my eye on your cock ever since I saw you in the bath, _Lady_ Bastet.”

tooltip for Absolutely - You’re so horny right _now,_ you’d have to be crazy to deny her. You expect her to play with it like she plays with her favorite toy.

“You honor me, _Your Ladyship_,” Adala says with a grin, fetching a small vial of oil and what looks like a small funnel.

We need to make sure every inch of your body is anointed, _Your Ladyship_.

Adala _starts_ by pouring a healthy dose of oil on your penis and balls, then she closes the vial and begins massaging your shaft.

_Next,_ she takes your shaft in _her_ hands, gently rubbing your tip and opening your urethra.

By the _Lady_, there are no words to describe how alien it feels to have fluid going in when normally it would be coming out!

Within a _heartbeat,_ she is orally worshipping your straining balls.

_Noisily,_ she kisses them, one by one, then starts to suckle upon them.

She tries - by the _Lady’s_ bounty, she tries so hard.

“Thank you for this boon, _Your Ladyship_.”

Ming, Ling, please anoint _Her Ladyship’s_ legs.

“Yes, _Lady_ Adala,” the twins reply in unison, each grabbing a pitcher full of oil.

Two sets of eyes flick towards your dripping dick, matching mischievous grins spreading on identical _faces, but_ the twins remain professional.

“For your butt, _Your Ladyship_. We must anoint inside you as well,” she explains, rubbing some slick oil on the tip of the dildo.

“Of course not, _Your Ladyship_. We haven’t even started molding your pussy. We use the same dildo for both tasks.”

“No need to worry, _Mistress_ Bastet. Just sit back, spread your legs and relax. I’ll make sure you enjoy your anointment.”

Giggling, you assure her that you have no doubts about that, before noting you’re happy to _lie_ back for her, but you currently can’t do anything about spreading your legs.

“May I, _Mistress_ Bastet?”

Far less than you’d expect for a dildo that _size, especially_ when you consider you used to be a virgin prior to this.

“Any takers for _Her Ladyship’s_ pussy?” Adala asks, lifting the still dripping dildo up in the air.

“Don’t worry, Ming. We can handle _Mistress_ Bastet’s butt and her back,” the head priestess says, giggling.

_Your Ladyship_, please turn around,” Adala asks.

Adala’s hands busy themselves with molding your once flat _rear, but_ you can feel your tush growing under her fingers. Firm, round, _and_ with just the right give to make it a thrill to hold. (Changed ‘butt’ to ‘rear’ to allow ‘,but’ instead of ‘butt, but’. Is this acceptable?)

Right about _then,_ Ling decides to start molding your new _vagina._ _She_ massages the flesh just behind your balls, making circular motions with a pair of fingers as if she was spreading and closing pussy lips.

It feels strange, at _first, but_ also rather nice. _The_ more she massages, the nicer it feels.

“Yes, _Your Ladyship_,” she replies.

The feeling is like when Adala had it up your asshole... _but_ at the same time, it’s totally different.

“Please, _Lady_ Bastet. Wait here, I’ll go fetch a mirror for _Your Ladyship_,” she says, hurrying off.

“Here, _Your Ladyship_,” announces Adala, carrying a full-body mirror.

LukaDoc commented 9 years ago

Yes on both suggestions.