AnthonyOhimor / TeamProject

Assessment for my masters programme
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Feedback on current DevLogs #1

Open arbbas opened 2 years ago

arbbas commented 2 years ago

You seem to have incorporated the provided material into the logs well so far. Please can you shed some light on how these logs will be pulled into the main website?

I think that the idea will be to have one main Dev Log page that is viewable as one scrolling page with all of the content. At the moment, they are all separate so this is something that will need to be addressed when the website is made.

Please can you also confirm that all of the images that you are using are not copyrighted and you have saved all of the sources?

Now that the Devlogs written by Umar and Harry have been uploaded, it is time to start thinking about writing your own. I would it is appropriate to write regarding your experiences with UI and website design on this project so far. You may also now want to consider looking at making the home page of the website more in theme with our game. I would suggest a black background.

Once you have gotten further with this, please update us and link us to some of the things that you have been working on. You have been rather quiet in this phase so it would be nice to get updates every few days instead of us requesting them. Thank you very much, keep up the good work.

HarryScape commented 2 years ago

This is one pre-made blog entry https://github.com/AnthonyOhimor/TeamProject/blob/main/07-02-22-Devlog6.md https://github.com/AnthonyOhimor/TeamProject/blob/main/21-02-22-Stage%20Development%20Roadmap.md https://github.com/AnthonyOhimor/TeamProject/blob/main/21-02-22-Phase2.md

Please revert it back to one entry. Also, could you make sure you attribute the correct authors to the correlating blog entries? If you scale the images more consistently space shouldn't be an issue. Some of the images are pretty random and seem out of place. If you need any specific parts of the design or development screenshotted just ask us for something in the discord. I have lots of screenshots of video clips you could convert to gif format to use on the dev blog. Make sure you proofread and run a spell check as there are some errors.

In regards this post: https://github.com/AnthonyOhimor/TeamProject/blob/main/2022-03-16-Enigma.md

If you go on the 'documents' channel on the discord there is a file called FlashHTML5_Games_Reports__Age_Data.pdf which can give you some insight into the target audience. Your post doesn't accurately reflect the game we are working on now. Particularly in regards to the game being online as that requirement was changed a while ago.

AnthonyOhimor commented 2 years ago

I will take account into what yo have posted harry.. Thank you.