The Broken, also known as Krokul in DraeneiEredun, are a mutated and devolved subrace of dDraenei who livedcan be found primarily in Outland.
NOTE: Replaced Draenei with their spoken language of Eredun. Also capitalized Draenei. I changed lived into found primarily since a few can be found on Azeroth and Argus
They, like most of the orcs, fell prey to the demons' sinister influence and were changed by the corruption. Though they lost some of their former powers, the Broken still present a clear danger to all races throughout Outland.
NOTE: spelling fix
The largest known faction of Broken in Outland, the Ashtongue Deathsworn, is currently led by Akama. They are supposedly allied with Illidan Stormrage.
NOTE: I'd like to add additional content to this in the future to highlight more positive examples of Broken such as Nobundo, those located in the Harborage and the Argussian Reach. However, it's fine as is for now.
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The Broken, also known as Krokul in Eredun, are a mutated and devolved sub-race of Draenei who can be found primarily in Outland. They, like most of the orcs, fell prey to the demons' sinister influence and were changed by the corruption. Though they lost some of their former power, the Broken still present a clear danger to all races throughout Outland.
Para 2. Affiliation Independent
Despite the (mostly) accidental regression into bBroken, many unbroken dDraenei not only distrust themthe Krokul but despise them.
NOTE: Fixed capitalization. Specified that the paragraph is referring to the Broken.
Although understandable of those bBroken who remain corrupted or in service to the Legion, one would think that the unbroken would be willing to welcome any of their people that survived the orcs' genocide.
NOTE: Capitalization
Most bBroken are independent as a result, although the Prophet Velen, the leader of the unbroken, does extend a hand to bBroken to help them find their way back amongst their brethren.
NOTE: Capitalization. Added the last part to make the sentence have a "coming home" feel to it
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Despite the (mostly) accidental regression into broken, many unbroken Draenei not only distrust the Krokul but despise them. Although understandable of those Broken who remain corrupted or in service to the Legion, one would think that the unbroken would be willing to welcome any of their people that survived the orcs' genocide. Most Broken are independent as a result, although the Prophet Velen, the leader of the unbroken, does extend a hand to Broken to help them find their way back amongst their brethren.
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You may always act when surprised at a combat encounter even if you failed your Perception check to notice it. You also have advantage versus weather effects.
NOTE: I'm pretty sure the surprised state always happens at the beginning of a combat encounter so the specifier isn't necessary. Also fixed the tense on fail and removed the "to notice it" since this is implied by the nature of a perception check.
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You may always act when surprised, even if you fail your Perception check. You also have advantage versus weather effects.
Para 11. True Draenei
As one of the enlightened cousins of the Eredar, the Draenei are devout followers of the light.
NOTE: Added the devout followers of the light portion to contrast them with their corrupted Eredar brethren
arrivedArriving on Azeroth shortly after the reopening of the Dark Portal and having livedLiving out the last centuries in exile and escapehiding from the Burning Legion, the Draenei have chosen to make their stand asare steadfast champions of the Light.
_NOTE:__ rewrote the above to highlight the transition of the Draenei from a people in hiding to people of action
andThey will do anything in their power to prevent another world from falling to the Flame.
NOTE: separated into two sentences to give this last bit added OOMPH
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As the enlightened cousins of the Eredar, the Draenei are devout followers of the Holy Light. Arriving on Azeroth shortly after the reopening of the Dark Portal, and having lived out the last centuries in exile hiding from the Burning Legion, the Draenei have chosen to make their stand as steadfast champions of the Light. They will do anything in their power to prevent another world from falling to the Flame.
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Para 1. Krokul
The Broken, also known as Krokul in
DraeneiEredun, are a mutated and devolved subrace ofdDraenei wholivedcan be found primarilyin Outland.They, like most of the orcs, fell prey to the demons' sinister influence and were changed by the corruption. Though they lost some of their former powers, the Broken still present a clear danger to all races through
outOutland.The largest known faction of Broken in Outland, the Ashtongue Deathsworn, is currently led by Akama. They are supposedly allied with Illidan Stormrage.
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The Broken, also known as Krokul in Eredun, are a mutated and devolved sub-race of Draenei who can be found primarily in Outland. They, like most of the orcs, fell prey to the demons' sinister influence and were changed by the corruption. Though they lost some of their former power, the Broken still present a clear danger to all races throughout Outland.
Para 2. Affiliation Independent
Despite the (mostly) accidental regression into
bBroken, many unbrokendDraenei not only distrustthemthe Krokulbut despise them.Although understandable of those
bBroken who remain corrupted or in service to the Legion, one would think that the unbroken would be willing to welcome any of their people that survived the orcs' genocide.Most
bBroken are independent as a result, although the Prophet Velen, the leader of the unbroken, does extend a hand tobBroken to help them find their way backamongst their brethren.FINAL
Despite the (mostly) accidental regression into broken, many unbroken Draenei not only distrust the Krokul but despise them. Although understandable of those Broken who remain corrupted or in service to the Legion, one would think that the unbroken would be willing to welcome any of their people that survived the orcs' genocide. Most Broken are independent as a result, although the Prophet Velen, the leader of the unbroken, does extend a hand to Broken to help them find their way back amongst their brethren.
Para 9. Adapter
You may always act when surprised
at a combat encountereven if you failedyour Perception checkto notice it. You also have advantage versus weather effects.FINAL
You may always act when surprised, even if you fail your Perception check. You also have advantage versus weather effects.
Para 11. True Draenei
As
one ofthe enlightened cousins of the Eredar, the Draeneiare devout followers of the light.arrivedArriving on Azeroth shortlyafter the reopening of the Dark Portaland having livedLivingout the last centuries in exileand escapehidingfrom the Burning Legion, the Draeneihave chosen to make their stand asaresteadfast champions of the Light.andTheywill do anything in their power to prevent another world from falling to the Flame.FINAL
As the enlightened cousins of the Eredar, the Draenei are devout followers of the Holy Light. Arriving on Azeroth shortly after the reopening of the Dark Portal, and having lived out the last centuries in exile hiding from the Burning Legion, the Draenei have chosen to make their stand as steadfast champions of the Light. They will do anything in their power to prevent another world from falling to the Flame.