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[Typo] Missing word in description of Hive NPC's Razor Swarms #825

Closed V2Blast closed 4 years ago

V2Blast commented 4 years ago

The Problem: The third sentence of the Razor Swarms base system says (emphasis mine):

Hostile characters start their turn at least partially within the area or move into it for the first time in a round take 2/4/6 [Burn].

The main verb of the sentence is "take", and "start their turn at least partially within the area or move into it for the first time in a round" is actually a descriptor explaining which hostile characters take Burn. There's a missing word before that phrase, causing the sentence to be grammatically incorrect.

The Solution: It should read (emphasis mine):

Hostile characters that start their turn at least partially within the area or move into it for the first time in a round take 2/4/6 [Burn].

The Location: Razor Swarms base system for the Hive NPC, in the bottom left of p. 302 (in the GM's Toolkit chapter of the premium PDF).

Jay-Iles commented 4 years ago

Fixed.