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[Typo] IPS-N Caliban fluff text: "it’s average job completion rate" should be "its average job completion rate" #839

Closed V2Blast closed 4 years ago

V2Blast commented 4 years ago

The Problem: In the 1/27 release of the IPS-N Caliban, the penultimate sentence of the fluff text (the last sentence of the second-to-last paragraph) uses the wrong "its":

It was only made small so it could to fit through most ship doors and bulkheads with minimal problems, crawl up the spinal corridors of ships, and speed up it’s average job completion rate by five minutes.

This refers to the mech's average job completion rate; this word should be a possessive pronoun, not a contraction of "it is".

The Solution: The word "it's" should be replaced with "its":

It was only made small so it could to fit through most ship doors and bulkheads with minimal problems, crawl up the spinal corridors of ships, and speed up its average job completion rate by five minutes.

The Location: 1/27 release of the IPS-N Caliban, p. 2, at the end of the second sentence of the second-to-last paragraph.