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zkEVM User Guides 2 #649

Closed Gunit2481 closed 6 months ago

Gunit2481 commented 6 months ago
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tksarah commented 6 months ago

Good morning! I have checked these on staging.

Bridge-Ethereum It seems there are many mistakes in “Bridge-Ethereum” It appears that significant corrections are necessary.

Bridge-Astar-EVM: Line 27 Current "### Astar EVMからAstar zkEVMへ" Update "### Astar EVMからAstar zkEVMへ:"

ASTR-Liquid-Staking: LGTM!

tksarah commented 6 months ago

I have checked again.

Bridge-Ethereum Insert a line break after the word ‘info’ on line 68.

Current:

:::info 転送は、Ethereum ネットワークの使用状況により、10 分から 30 分かかることがあります。

Update:

:::info 転送は、Ethereum ネットワークの使用状況により、10 分から 30 分かかることがあります。

I’ve noticed an error in the original English version. It seems there is a “3.” in the Relay Link section.

スクリーンショット 2024-03-23 002918

Apart from these, it looks good to me (LGTM).