Gampeplan for revision

[nniiicc]

Things to cut straight out

• [ ] research questions :/
• [ ] description of case selection

Places to cut down on length

• [ ] section introductions and transitions
• [ ] Introduction (opening paragraph is prob unnecessary)
• [ ] background (can streamline some

Once we get to 8K words

• [ ] add in some info asymm connections - first in the background section, and then throughout to make connections

[nniiicc]

3 ways that the findings are organized

• Awareness & Access
• Sentiment

Policy is described as

• Design
• Implementation

To be added

• Asymmetries

Three Implications

• enforcement
• workers in policy design
• regulation as one of many tools to reign in platform power

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NW next to do:

• [Streamline the discussion section]
• [Streamline the findings section]
• [Re-write the introduction section highlighting our findings and implications of our findings]
• [Streamline the methods section]

After this Lindsey will

• [Commect the conceptual pieces of the paper together (NW will highlight with color) - esp the asymmetry contribution]
• [Streamline the introduction and discussion sections]
• [Re-write the abstract]

Finally

• [LS and NW do a co-read through - mark up anything for one another to fix, and then format for submission]

Etc things to straighten out 52 interviews 7 focus groups

in total we have 80 unique participants -but LS will go back and make sure we have participants from Wave 1 accounted for in our Wave 3 recruits.