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Bachelor Seminar report on active state machine learning
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[RDY] Small fix in the W-method piece #32

Closed StefanBoodt closed 8 years ago

StefanBoodt commented 8 years ago

I removed some duplicate text. The four requirements are surpassable and thus not so much requirements. The text said twice what the three steps of the method were, once in bullet points (from Chow) and one in text (from Ipate).

Hjdskes commented 8 years ago

Regarding P versus $P$, this whole section needs updates like that (I see e.g. n and m that should be $n$ and $m$).

Also, could you update this section to:

  1. Remove all commas before "and"; e.g. "..., and ..." should be "... and ..."
  2. Replace modelled with modeled
StefanBoodt commented 8 years ago

@Unia The comma should be there. It is called the oxford comma. A comma should be present before the and at the end of a summation of more than 2 objects. It can be found in many pieces of our text as well.

Hjdskes commented 8 years ago

Then for consistency those instances should also be fixed. The Oxford comma is not a necessity; it is merely a style of writing that can be applied if one so favors.

Hjdskes commented 8 years ago

This PR should be merged after #34, which it is now rebased on.