Opening Statement Summary
This paper explores different aspects of stillbirth using statistics from Open Data Toronto.
Strong Positive Points
Some images were added to make the data more clear, and the images were analyzed to make it easier for readers to understand the images.
Critical Improvements Needed
In the final presentation of the paper, the second part of the data contains a piece of code, which is not required in the paper. In addition, I did not see the sketch you drew, which is also required for the final submission.
Suggestions for Improvement:
You can add some introduction and summary of the paper in the README, delete the code in the second part of the data, and submit the sketch in the final submission.
Evaluation:
I would give it 60/100 points.
Reasons:
I think the topic and ideas of this paper are good, and there are many images and analyses, but there are some things that need to be changed in terms of content.
Opening Statement Summary This paper explores different aspects of stillbirth using statistics from Open Data Toronto.
Strong Positive Points
Some images were added to make the data more clear, and the images were analyzed to make it easier for readers to understand the images.
Critical Improvements Needed
In the final presentation of the paper, the second part of the data contains a piece of code, which is not required in the paper. In addition, I did not see the sketch you drew, which is also required for the final submission.
Suggestions for Improvement:
You can add some introduction and summary of the paper in the README, delete the code in the second part of the data, and submit the sketch in the final submission.
Evaluation:
I would give it 60/100 points.
Reasons:
I think the topic and ideas of this paper are good, and there are many images and analyses, but there are some things that need to be changed in terms of content.