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p 5 par 2: Move dash, add semicolon, and add comma after "agreements". #9

Closed kosanke closed 7 years ago

kosanke commented 7 years ago
  1. The Bitnation blockchain Public Notary - which is being used for a wide range of purposes; <- marriages, wills, birth certificates, company registration, land titles, freelance agreements, loan agreements, and so on;
kosanke commented 7 years ago
  1. The Bitnation blockchain Public Notary which is being used for a wide range of purposes - marriages, wills, birth certificates, company registration, land titles, freelance agreements, loan agreements and so on;

becomes

  1. The Bitnation blockchain Public Notary - which is being used for a wide range of purposes; marriages, wills, birth certificates, company registration, land titles, freelance agreements, loan agreements, and so on;
jofster commented 7 years ago

for consistency, changed to:

  1. The Bitnation blockchain Public Notary, which is being used for a wide range of purposes including marriages, wills, birth certificates, company registration, land titles, freelance agreements, loan agreements and so on;