These are my revisions to the text. This also puts figures at the end (but does not separate figures and captions---still not sure the best way to do this) and adds line numbers and double-spacing. The most major changes are just re-wording a few complex sentences and deleting some text both of us thought probably wasn't necessary.
Things that (maybe?) still need to be done:
Supplemental file with site map(s) (maybe?)
Finalize supplemental on SPEI data source
Supplemental justifying choice of size variable (maybe?)
Integrate paragraph generalizing seasonality of lagged effects somewhere (discussion? results?)
I'm going to work on the supplements in a separate PR after I send this draft off to Maria. She might have suggestions on whether all these supplemental docs need to exist or not.
These are my revisions to the text. This also puts figures at the end (but does not separate figures and captions---still not sure the best way to do this) and adds line numbers and double-spacing. The most major changes are just re-wording a few complex sentences and deleting some text both of us thought probably wasn't necessary.
Things that (maybe?) still need to be done:
I'm going to work on the supplements in a separate PR after I send this draft off to Maria. She might have suggestions on whether all these supplemental docs need to exist or not.