The (no really) final edits

[embruna]

In addition to the committed changes, a few small things to deal with. Line numbers refer to the word doc

1. line 245: should we cite other r packages? tidyverse? others used for viz?
2. line 291 "almost 40% higher". Shouldn't this be 25% higher? 0.4 * 1.25 = 0.5
3. . line 323: should this be 1999? or did you mean first "transition year" 1998-1999?
4. I found lines 325-328 a bit out of place.
5. Citation fixes:
   • aguirre 2021: lower case t after colon
   • beguria 2017: [manual]? should this be a website?
   • bianchi 2013: lower case title words
   • bruna 2005: lower case title words
   • evers et al: correct volume issue pages or in press
   • janssen 2921: doi has duplicated https/doi
   • McKee 1993 - remove january from year, needs volume/ pages numbers or url
   • Payton 2003: journal missing
   • r core team: vienna needed?
   • Scott 2021: volume issue and page numbers or in press
   • uriarte 2018: change journal name from short to regular (spell out global change biology)

[Aariq]

we should cite other packages, my twitter thread made me realize this. Probably gratia and ggplot2 for visualization.

[Aariq]

I found lines 325-328 a bit out of place.

Not entirely sure what you mean here (line numbers have shifted). The last few sentences of the "survival" paragraph?