Closed etienne-napoleone closed 6 years ago
The article will be reviewed by @anhntv2012 concerning general editorial line and @phamvancam2104 regarding to the technical side.
Edit: Changed the link to the medium draft: https://medium.com/p/9b3b26560392/edit Let me know if there are aspects you would like to have in the article I didn't mention.
Hi @patrickburm , nice to meet you :)
The introduction of article is good. I love the way you presented the development of consensus mechanisms.
There are some points I would like you to consider:
There is no reward comparison in your article.
Rather than devoting a whole paragraph to each project, it'll be clearer to talk about one point of comparison/contrast at a time (discuss a certain point of comparison/contrast related to all projects). For example: How to become candidate: For EOS, for Lisk, for TomoChain etc. You should plan a list of criteria and figure out which ones you want to discuss more deeply.
An added comparison table will be very helpful (no of masternodes/delegates/block producers; how to become a candidate (deposit/fee); how often a voting round is, how to vote (fee/deposit), how to unvote, lock time; how reward is shared to voters, how reward is planned to be reduced year after year etc)
It'd better to have a conclusion at the end of the article.
You consider PoSV as a form of DPoS consensus mechanisms, which I am not sure is the way we want to promote our consensus. @phamvancam2104 @etienne-napoleone , pls tell me how you think
Thanks for the feedback @anhntv2012 , I agree with the points you raised. @patrickburm Can you update the draft regarding to the comments?
Thanks for your feedback and nice to meet you too! :) @anhntv2012 Sure @etienne-napoleone I will update the article regarding those aspects and share the draft on medium once it's done.
@patrickburm Cool, can you post the link to the draft here also?
Yes, it's easier for everyone if I just post the medium drafts here instead of google docs link right?
I do think so :)
This is how it looks now: https://medium.com/p/9b3b26560392/edit
@anhntv2012 and @phamvancam2104 could you take a look?
Hi @patrickburm
The updated article is better than the previous one. Still, I'd like you to consider the following suggestions:
You already discussed one main point of comparison at a time for all 3 projects. However, it still needs to be clearer. If one thing is mentioned about 1 project, it should be also talked about in the other 2. I put below all main points for ease of explanation: * Becoming a block producer
Reward Engine You should focus on the block reward rather than the circulating supply
Others:
@etienne-napoleone @phamvancam2104 Any other comments, sirs?
Best,
Thanks again for your feedback! @anhntv2012
Please check again @anhntv2012 @phamvancam2104 @etienne-napoleone best regards!
Hi, for me it's good for publishing now. Just a minor addition: "If a TomoChain masternode/masternode candidate would resign, the 50k TOMO he deposited would be locked in the voting smart contract from that time for 30 days."
@phamvancam2104 @etienne-napoleone How do you think?
Hi @patrickburm Let me give it a check. I'll write my comments directly on the article. Btw, is there any way to share the comments/feedback on medium with a group of users?
@phamvancam2104 because his article is submited to the TomoChain channel, all TomoChain editors can view each others comments.
@etienne-napoleone Great! I did not notice about that :)
Hi @patrickburm, Thank you very much for your great article and I have acquired significant knowledge :). Btw, besides some minors, I think the article is ready to publish.
Thank you very much @phamvancam2104 , @anhntv2012 @etienne-napoleone for this valuable feedback! I implemented your suggestions so I think it should be ready to publish now. I put the comparison table above the Conclusion now. By the way, thank you @phamvancam2104 for the template ;)
I'm closing this issue, @alex9121 feel free to incorporate this article in your publications
Estimated time: 5h
Why: As a following to the discarded article https://github.com/tomochain/docs/issues/53, it might be better to offer a flat comparison between our voting rewards and vote manipulation possibilities rather than focusing on the problems of one of them.
What: A technical comparison between EOS, Lisk and TomoChain focus on the reward system. Their advantages, differences but also how it can be abused and what is put in place to avoid that.