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Grammarly Mistakes #2

Open TabNahida opened 5 months ago

TabNahida commented 5 months ago

You should check your grammar. It's too terrible.

  1. nobody knows, however->Nobody knows. However,
  2. I am a energy reducer -> I am an energy reducer Actually, I cannot understand what is an energy reducer. Energy saver would be better.
  3. You cannot preview what I am going to do, so do myself. I can get what you want to say, but the word you use is too CHINGLISH. Preview -> predict myself -> I.
  4. My name is Subkey Charisma, means the secondary Key -> My name is Subkey Charisma, which means the secondary Key
  5. So it is essencial but not important?! -> So it is essential but not important!
  6. With balanced feeling -> With a balanced feeling However, it's strange.
  7. frames -> framework

    CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR PLEASE!!!!!!

    It's too difficult for me to understand your sentences. I recommend you to use grammarly. It's free. And I think that would improve your English. If I'm your English teacher, I would go to hell immediately.

Bylx666 commented 5 months ago

哈哈中国人就讲中国话呗, 毕竟我一直以为我主页不会有人看所以没咋在意细节语法.

TabNahida commented 5 months ago

You're right, but Genshin Impact is a new open-world adventure developed by HoYoverse itself. The game takes place in a fantasy world called Teyvat, where those chosen by the gods are granted the "Vision" , the power of the guiding elements. You will play a mysterious character named "Traveler", in the free travel to meet different personalities, unique abilities of the companions, together with them to defeat the enemy, find lost relatives -- and gradually discover the truth of the "Allogene".

kde-yyds commented 5 months ago

You're right, but Genshin Impact is a new open-world adventure developed by HoYoverse itself. The game takes place in a fantasy world called Teyvat, where those chosen by the gods are granted the "Vision" , the power of the guiding elements. You will play a mysterious character named "Traveler", in the free travel to meet different personalities, unique abilities of the companions, together with them to defeat the enemy, find lost relatives -- and gradually discover the truth of the "Allogene".

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